Flower staggers out of the burrow, wounded. She collapses. "Zaphod! Everyone! I can't get up!" Zaphod runs over. "What happened? Why are you bleeding?"
Flower raises her head "I- the snake and-" Zaphod gasps "Snake? What snake? Why did you-" Flower lowers her head. "The pups, the snake, it's dead, but my head... I tried." Zaphod sits beside her. "It wasn't your fault. You did try. Are the pups alright?" Flower opens her eyes. "They're alive."
Zaphod bends down as Flower closes her eyes. She suddenly opens them and looks around. "They're so beautiful!" Zaphod looks around too, "Who?" Flower smiles, "I had thought, but never was sure!" Zaphod paws her stomach, "Who?" Flower closes her eyes again, "The spirits! They... they want me to go with them!" She lays back down and stares at Zaphod. Zaphod sheads a tear, "Then why don't you go?" Flower closes her eyes, relaxes and withers away. Zaphod smiles a warm smile. "Don't worry, Flower. We'll be together... someday."

Flower journies over the rainbow and into heaven. Where she may never stray. She may never starve. She will never feel pain.

IN MEMORY OF FLOWER: THE END

Anyone? How did I do?

that is wonderful i was almost crying so sad thankl you for such a nice story