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HI!!!! Big Grin This is my first story that I EVER put on line.You could call it seson 3 of Meerkat Manor althow it's a sort of a comidy. Big Grin So . . here is the first eposode. ***Rocket Dog's Stance*** Early in the morning,once again,Rocket Dog is first up.Ever sence came back from roving,she hasn't had any contact with rovers. Now the rest of the Whiskers surface,sun themselves,and start cleaning the burrow entrance. Finaly it's time to go foraging,but Rocket Dog won't go,She has bisnuss to take care of. She spots Zapod and with tail up,approaches him. ~ Zapod:What? Rocket Dog:You may be my dad,but I'm the boss around here.You can protect from mobs but not rovers.(!) Zapod:Why? Rocket Dog:WHY?! Because the mob is small thats why!! No wonder Flower said you are stupid. Zapod:WWHHHOOOOOOO!!!! I'm stupid!!!!!! (does a jig) Rocket Dog: Roll Eyes NO,no,no!! Thats not a good thing!!! Zapod:It's not? Rocket Dog:No,it's not . . . Omlit Face! Zaphod throws a fit:WWHHHHHAAAAAAAA!!!!!! Rocket Dog says to herself: Oh boy,and I have to put up with this! . . . . . The rest of you,let's leave Omlit Face here and go foraging.~~~~~~~~ While foraging. . . . . (Rocket Dog has a tasty centipide in her mouth when . . ) ~~~~~~ Mitch:(bark,bark,bark)Halk!!!!! RUN!!!!!!! Eek ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Everyone dashes to the nerest bolt hole.After all the meerkats are in the hole,Rocket Dog counts heads. . . theres one extra,and Zaphod didn't come foraging. . . . who could it be? When it's safe outside,she approaches the mistory kat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rocket Dog:Who are you? Mistory Kat:Me? . . . Well then could, it be Rocket Dog as DF insted of Flower? Rocket Dog:Yes, . . but who are you? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~***************~~ On the next eposode of Whiskers Reminat ~Life Without Flower~ :How did Rocket Dog not see this kat?Who is this mitory kat? and Will she finaly have a partner? All on the next eposode of: Whiskers Reminit ~Life Without Flower~
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Reviews Please! Big Grin
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Anyone????
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Actuly it's season 4.Sorry about that! Wink
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I liked it.It tells about how RD must have felt being the Whiskers new boss.Really cool. Wink Smile
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Four Stars!
And thank u for using my Omlet Face creation.
I love it when people do.
I put u on my buddylist.
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Thanks guys! Hey Noodls! Ya,I thought It was Pritty cool . . Omlit Face!!! LOL!!! Big Grin
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I'll post some more as soon as posible or Sunday. See you soon!! Big Grin Wink
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HI!!!! Anyone else have comets? Big Grin
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No, I don't have a comet...I've got this asteroid though! jk Wink
Great story, kalahari_kats_2! I really like seeing RD's view, and it was so funny! Poor RD, she's gotta deal w/ old Omlet Face now. Wink Big Grin
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LOL!!!!!!! I can't stop laughing!!! Big Grin Well I'll post another episode on either late Sat. or Sun. LOL!!! (sorry can't stop ) Big Grin Wink
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Sorry,I spelled ummm . . . . IT wrong. I'm not the greatest speller you know. Wink
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Hi!! This Episode will take several posts to do so I'll start now . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Big Grin
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Rocket DogBig GrinF/Whiskers
Zaphod:Flower's Partner
Mitch: Strong,Brave
The Kids: Always Adventurous
The Aztecs: Over Run By Pups
Maybaline: DF/Aztecs
The Zapa: From The Dark Side
The Comandos: Small But Tough Mob
And
Hanibal: The Bully That No One
Wants To See

Welcome To:
Whisker's Reminit
~Life Without Flower~
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Episode #2

The Mistory Kat and His Message


(Pick up from last sene Episode #1)

Rocket Dog: Yes,but who are you?
Mistory Kat: Me,Carlos.
Rocket Dog: (Gasps) But your dead!
Carlos: Yes,but I am one of them.
Rocket Dog: Them who?
Carlos: The ones that see the future.
Rocket Dog: Is that why your here?
Carlos: Yes,this is all I can say,the future is bright and dark like life is. . . . . . . . . . I must go,my work here is done.

Rocket Dog watches in wonder as Carlos runs up,up,up into the sky. When he disapears she thinks about what he said . . . . . . . .

Rocket Dog: What could it mean?
Mitch: Rocket Dog? You ok?
Rocket Dog: Ya,I think.
Mitch: You sure?
Rocket Dog: Oh! I don't know! That Kat told me this: The future is bright and dark like life is. . . . So something bad is going to happen,I know it!
Mitch: Wow. Let's just prepare and wait for it to happen,ok?
Rocket Dog: Ok

Just before they leave,they spot the Zapa. They've gone a bit too far into the Whisker's tarritory. They start with a stare down to see who goes first. Then Rocket Dog makes the first move. Mitch takes on Hudini and Rocket Dog squares off with Ponker.

Ponker: Grrrrrr!!!
Rocket Dog: Grrrrrr!!! You stay out of my tarritoy!!
Ponker: It was only a visit.
Rocket Dog: An unpleasent one at that!
Ponker: Well said . . .

Mean while at the Whisker's burrow . . . .
It looks like Zaphod has company. It's Lola, the old Zapa DF. Looks like it's Zaphod's lucky day.

Zaphod: Lola?
Lola: Yes,let's run away.
Zaphod: I know just the place,come on!!

Back at the fight . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Aperantly it looks like Rocket Dog has bit Ponker's leg (Hip) and left a nasty mark.

Ponker: Zapa!!! Retreat!!!
Rocket Dog: And don't come back!!!! Grrrrrr!!!

While Rocket Dog says this the rest of the Whiskers bark at the Zapa. Then Rocket Dog leads the mob home for the night.

Up in the clouds . . . . . . . .
Flower: Good timeing Carlos,good timeing.
Carlos: thanks Flower,thanks a lot . . . .


On the next episode of Whisker's Reminit
~Life Without Flower~ : What did Carlos Mean?
Where did Lola and Zaphod go?
And:
What will Rocket Dog and Ponker think when they arive at the burrow and see that Lola and Zaphod aren't there?
All on the next episode of :
Whisker's Reminit
~Life Without Flower~
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There! Episode #2 complete! Reviews please! Big Grin
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Great episode! But isn't Punk leader of the Zappa?
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Ya,sorry about that . . . . . . just imagine Ponker as Punk,ok? Once again,sorry. I'll get it right on the next episode!! Wink Razz Big Grin
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kalaharikats2, I ave more storis! Check out CrazyMeerkat!

This is great!
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Anyone else????!! Bark! Bark!

~Kats
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I'll post in about 10-15 min,ok??
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Episode #3


New Beginings & Old Trubles


(at the burrow)
Axle: Rocket Dog . . . . . were's Zaphod?
Rocket Dog: (gasps) He's not here . . . Everyone!! Start snifing for Zaphod!

*snif,snif,snif,snif*

Mitch: Rocket Dog!!
Rocket Dog: Found the sent??
Mitch: Yes of Zaphod & Lola . . .
Rocket Dog: They must have left together. I might have more luck of finding a rover now. Come on!! Lets go inside . . . . .


While they go inside for the night,the ones outside don't see a shadow on the horison.


(back at the Zappa's burrow)
Punk: WERE IS LOLA!!!!!! She's sopost to be babysitting!!!!!!!
Hudini: Calm down hunny,she's probably inside.
Punk: It doesn't sound like it!!! Mad
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Hudini: She's not there . . . & the pups are gone. Red Face
Punk: THE PUPS!!!!!!!!! Mad GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!! We must find her,but not now.


Early in the morning,at the Whisker's burrow. Rocket Dog,Mitch,Daisy,& Toska are first up. The lone kat is closer & Daisy spotes him first.


Daisy: Well,look at that! He must be interested in you,Rocket Dog. Wink


Rocket Dog goes over to investagate . . . . . but gets caught up in the kats gromming.

It's Wilson . . . then after a while they come back to the group & Wilson stamps his domanince. Then the Whiskers go out foraging. It's dry season & food is getting scarce. Often fights break out over the smallest morsal,sence every bit counts. Wilson brings a fat milipede to Rocket Dog insted of eating it himself. She takes it & gives him a squarpion in return. Then Rocket Dog remembers what Carlos said & realizes she has the good future. Then wonders who has the bad future,but soon forgets & goes back to foraging.


(Mean while . . . )
Zaphod & Lola are at a oasis & having a great time. [2 large umbrellas shade them,while they sit in lawn chairs & sip Squarpionade]


Lola: This is the best place I've ever been!! Shall we start a new mob with Punk's pups??
Zaphod: What ever you want hunny,what ever you want.


(fade out & fade into Whiskers burrow)
As the mob setels down for the night,Wilson & Rocket Dog watch the sun set into a new begining.
(fade out slowly)



On the next episode of Whisker's Reminit ~Life Without Flower~ :
Will Punk sirvive the nasty bite Rocket Dog gave her? Can Maybiline control her mob that's over run by pups?
All this on the next episode of Whisker's Reminit ~Life Without Flower~
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Opps,I frogot the opaning . . . . oh well. Wink Big Grin Razz

So howed I do???
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Any opinions??
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Awsome!!!! Cool Cool Cool
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Great!! Big Grin

~Kats
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