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Registered: 12-01-07
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Characters The Dark Master (Evil) A huge meerkat (6 feet tall) that can transform into a HUGE dragon with many powers. Can cause eternal darkness if BADLY injured. Trys to take over the world. Dragon Kat TOUGHEST 'kat that has wings and can breath fire. There are only 2 left of the breed. Largest time of legendary 'kat. Eyes change color. Fire Kat Has fire red eyes and can blow fire. Fearsome fighter, and EXTREAMLY rare. 5 left of the breed. Thunder Kat Has yellow eyes and when it roars, it sounds ike thunder. Can create storms. It can shoot lightning. STRONG fighter. Preety rare. Ice Kat Light blue eyes. Can shoot ice, can cause blizzards. TOUGH fighter. Rare. Magic Kat Purple eyes and can do magic. Can strike with magical waves. FEARSOME fighter. EXTREAMLLY rare. 5 left of breed. Evergreen Kat Green eyes. Can shoot leaves and fine STRONG fighter. Rare. Sabertooth Kat Brown eyes, very long teeth. FEROCIOUS fighter. Rare. Water Kat Aqua eyes, can strike water. TOUGH fighter. Common. Metal Claw Kat Long claws made of metal, grey eyes. TOUGH fighter. Rare. Storm Kat Black eyes and can cause earthquakes, hurricanes, high winds, tornadoes, etc.. Can shoot anything storm related. EXCELLENT fighter. EXTREAMLY rare. 4 left of breed. Snake Kat Can survive any snake bite. Green eyes. Can spew posion. FEARSOME fighter. Common. The story will be here soon! 
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Registered: 10-08-07
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Sounds cool!
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Senior Member
Registered: 12-01-07
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Senior Member
Registered: 11-12-07
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As Dark puts it... SAWEET!
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Registered: 12-01-07
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Story time!
Episode 1: A New Dawn
It's a new day at the Kats' burrow. It's the first day without Ember to greet the Kats when they first emerge from the burrow. ~~~~~~~~~~~Cue: The song "Morning"~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Ahh, good morning... Mom," Goliath said, his smile fading when he remembered what happened the night before when the Dark Master killed his mother. Goliath tried his tears after the flash-back, and saw his father sitting a few feet away from the burrow singin', "My Wish". Once his father finished, he walked up, and wrapped his paws around his father and weeped,"Oh, Dad.... why'ed he have kill her? I miss Mom.." "I know son, I miss her, too. She was the most kindest, loving, loyal, and beautiful girl you ever met. I miss Ember too," Mofasa cried. Goliath couldn't stand seeing his father cry. He was always a funny, always happy guy, he was never like this before. Mofasa wiped his faced and said, "She'll always be with us though, Goliath. Last night, I felt her bless my scar I got. She touched it and kissed to show she appresiatted what we did to try and save her. Her love is right there." Mofasa pointed to the horrible scar going across his eye. "Thanks, Dad, for telling me that, it helped a bit, but... things will change sooooooo much from now on," Goliath said. "I know," Mofasa said.
Goliath walks away to sit next to the burrow entrance. Then Flame walked out. "Goliath, I know you're sad, man. That's okay. But think, Ember would want you to move on. She wouldn't want you to be sad your whole life. Please, just don't be sad forever. Ember will always be in your heart," Flame said, wiping tears and pating Goliath's shoulder. " I know. I probably will be sad forever, but what you said might help. But don't take this the wrong way, but what you just said kinda hard to do when it was your mother that died, bud. But I know you're just trin' to help. Thanks man," Goliath said. "Come on, Goliath. Wanna play?" Flame asked. "No thanks, Flame, just not up for it," Goliath answered. "It's alright, I got to go wake the rest of the mob up. Don't want them to sleep too late!" Flame said. As Flame went under ground, Goliath walked up to Mofasa. "Dad, tell everyone I'm going out wondering. Flame gave me some good advice, I'm gonna try to cheer up, he said Mom will always be in my heart. She wouldn't want me to be said forever," He said. "I'd normally say no because it's so dangerous... but I'd do anything to cheer you up. But BE CAREFUL." Mofasa tried to smile. "Thanks Pa," Goliath said. "Oh, just remember this, we may be going through bad times, but something good is going to happen," Mofasa smiled. "Alright Dad! Be back soon!" Goliath said. Mofasa waved good-bye.
Soon, Goliath flew above a watering hole. He flew down for a drink. After a few laps of water, he stared at the top of a flowery dune. (It was the rainy season) His mouth fell open, he felt dissy. He was starring at the most beautiful creature since Ember died. After Goliath shook himself, he relized it was a female meerkat starring in the other dirrection. He went in a daze again, when he saw her face, he fell to the ground and nearly fainted. Then he got up a said," Pull yourself together man! It's just a girl. Uhh.. that don't fit, she's just the most gourgous, beautiful creature I've ever seen! Don't faint man, just walk up and say hi," Goliath talked to himself.
When he reached the girl, he took a breath and said," Uh....hi." The female meerkat turned around and said, "Oh, I'm very sorry, I didn't notice you there, my name is Evangalean. Whats your's?" "My....my name is Goliath," he says in a daze. "Nice name, are you a dragon breed?" Evangalean asked. Goliath shook himself. "Yes, I am. Are you?" He asked. "Yup," Evangalean said. "Would you like to take a walk?" Goliath asked. "Sure!" Evangalean answered. "What's your story, Goliath?" Evangalean asked. "Well, I live with a mob called the Kats, and my Dad's boss. His name is Mofasa. And,well.....my mom.... she, she.... she's dead. She was defending us from the Dark Master, and she died...." Evangalean saw a tear rush down Goliath's face. "It's okay, Goliath. I know you're sad, but she's in a better place. I'm an orphan. I see my mom and dad in the sky everynight. I know they're in a better place," Evangalean said. "Thanks Evangalean, he, how would you like if I intraduced you to my family?" Goliath asked. "Sure!" Evangalean answered. Goliath knew he had a friend.
How is it so far?
PS In mythical mobs, subordinantes are alound to have pups without permission.
On the next episode, find out what happens to Evangalean's and Goliath's friendship.
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Senior Member
Registered: 09-15-07
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This looks really cool, but are you going to write some of it soon?
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Senior Member
Registered: 12-01-07
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Yup! More comin' soon!
~mozart2
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Senior Member
Registered: 11-12-07
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Wait..you said subordnates can have pups..and "somthing" will happen to their elationship...
Ooooohlala!
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Senior Member
Registered: 12-01-07
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Well Noodlenoo, you coud be right!
(Hint, hint!)
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Registered: 12-01-07
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Episode 2: when Evangalean met Mofasa
"I'll race ya'!" Goliath yelled as he started off. "I'm coming!" Evangalean yelled after him. The 2 laughed as they ran until Goliath saw Mofasa turn his head and was stunned to see a meerkat that looked almost just like Ember. Evangalean stood back as Goliath tould Mofasa...
Sorry, i gotta go. I'll try to finish the episode tomorrow. Bye!
~mozart2
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Registered: 12-01-07
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Hey!! You named the mob after me!! LOL! This is great!!
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Registered: 08-12-03
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Hey yall! I've got a BIG surprise!!!!!!! I'm not gonna finish the story for a certain reason...................... I'M WRITING A BOOK ON THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm already almost finished with it, and when i'm done, i'll be sure to tell the story here. (I plan to become the world's youngest book writer.) But now, i've got a quiz about the book. U answer the questions and then I tell u who u are most like in the story. Oh, and I've changed the name of the book to, "The Kats". Here goes! (Please give full answers.)
1. You r out foraging. There is barely any food and everyone is starving. BUT YOUR WIVES PUPS R COMING!!!!!!!!!!! Going back would spend alot of time, but your mate needs to get back. What d u do? 2. There is a bushfire. U are safe from the flames, but the rest of your family is still stuck. Whatz your move? 3. A meber of your family that has tried to hurt u in the past just saved your life. The character is in his burrow, severly injured. What do u do? 4. A pup has just been kindnapped by a man who realy give u da creeps. U want to save the pup, though. Do u save her? 5. What do u think the books about?
~mozart2
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Registered: 08-12-03
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Oh! One more thing! The Dark Master is no longer The Dark Master. His new name is Kilawea. (That's pronounced, 'Kill-a-way-a)
So far, everthing else is the same.
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Registered: 12-01-07
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1. Go back to the burrow then go back to foraging as soon as posibal. 2. ummm........powers? if not I'll risk myself to save them. 3. Try and help him. Act nice even if he made mistaks in the past. 4. SAVE HER!!!!!!!!! 5. The breeds of kats in they're life. A legend.
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Registered: 08-12-03
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Alright! Kats, u are............. GOLIATH!!!!!!!! Goliath is the bravest member of the family and will d anything to save a family member or to be nice. Killing really isn't in him, and he has a kind spot to give 2 everyone. The book is preety much what u said. It is mainly a love story, but has a big slash with Kilawea in it. But altogether, it's a BIG love story. it has hate, love, suspence, care, tearful moments, miracles, and much more! If u want a little more info on the book, like a bit of the stuff that happens, just ask me! (If u ask me that, it will be almost like the back of a book.)
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Registered: 08-12-03
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Hey Kats! Oh, here r a few mre questions. This is more like a guessing game. I tell u a song, and u guess what meerkat from this story fits. It will be multiple choice! And I'll tell u a bit about a character that's never been mentioned before if that character is an opption. (If you've never heard the song, just go to YouTube and check it out!)
I need you- Tim McGraw & Faith Hill A. Mofasa and Ember B. Storm and Gust (They r 2 storm breeds. And they r siblings) C. Kilawea & Ruby (Ruby is a fire breed.) D. Esperanza & Malineche (They r both the same breed. Malineche is older, by alot. XD)
2. Mountains- Lonestar A. Goliath B. Kilawea C. Mofasa D. Flame
3. Savin Me- Nickelback A. Kilawea B. Goliath C. Mofasa D. Evangalean
4. Some People Change- Montgomery Gentry A. Goliath B. Evangalean C. Kilawea D. Ember
5. What do u think would be the best song to describe the book? A. Keep Holdin On- Avril Lavigne B. Stand- Rascal Flatts C. Life is a Highway- Rascal Flatts D. Little bit of Life- Craig Morgan
What do u think, Kats?
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Senior Member
Registered: 12-01-07
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Jezz......the only 1 I heard of is life is a highway.............the only music I lison to is Disney
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Senior Member
Registered: 08-12-03
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Oh
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Senior Member
Registered: 03-05-07
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If we answered all of your questions,then you can start "Episode 3" I wander what it would be about,I don't know if it's going to be "When Mofasa met Scar".
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Registered: 02-23-08
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Hey dillonkat! This is mozart2! My computer was being a bit loco, so I made ANOTHER account. But you will usually see me as mozart22, but my computer was just being weird. And yes, i will add some more to de story soon. And it's not Scar, it's Kilawea.
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Registered: 04-05-08
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Well, I was going to continue teh story, but it may go over a "G" rated level. And I now it is supposed to stay at a suitible for all audience here, but the story may not be appropreate4 everyone. But, I still really am writing the story, so you will one day be able ot read it!
Hugs, nuzzles, and kisses, ♥Ruby Talon♥
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